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Plz someone who speaks English as their first language edit this short text?

Hi, I want to put this on me website. Thx ************ GoldenHost is the most complete website and ecommerce solution on the web. We have gathered everything needed to run a successful online business under one roof. On the web, most business web solutions are merely web hosts offering ecommerce features. Unlike these services, GoldenHost is a professional company involved in all phases of running online stores, including building, maintaining, and marketing. Each of our services is available separately, and you can select a mixture of those that you feel would be most beneficial to your business. A trustable company offering global services: Do you know how many businesses have been got online by GoldenHost, up to the current month? USA:2348, UK:403, Ca:388, India:107, Australia:96, China:44, Other Countries:109

Public Comments

1. It is fine the way it is
2. It looks fine to me. But, I'm not sure about the first line of the last paragraph using the semi-colon. It could be: A trustable company offering global services: Approxiamately (number of businesses) have been got online by GoldenHost, up to the current month. Unless a rhetorical question was the point of the sentence. In which case maybe replace the semi colon with a full stop. Don't take my word for it though, I might be completely wrong and you might be right. x
3. my native tongue is spanish but I'm pretty sure I'm fluent in english. and the text looks fine to me :)
4. Here are some tips: The first two paragraphs are kind of 'wordy'. Like "most complete" - is a little over the top, try just complete Replace "trustable" with trustworthy And instead of "...offering global services: Do you know how many businesses have been got online by GoldenHost, up to the current month? USA:2348, UK:403, Ca:388, India:107, Australia:96, China:44, Other Countries:109" maybe try something like "...offering global services. Current number of businesses online using GoldenHost: USA:2348, UK:403, Ca:388, India:107, Australia:96, China:44, Other Countries:109"
5. yes