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Please determine the writer's level? 1) Please determine the writer's age 2) How much will you grade the essay out of 100% ? 3) Do you think it's professional essay or basic ? In an ideal world, it would be necessary for an average person to learn about economy or at least its basics; this will give people a brief background about how companies work and develop. Companies are everywhere and they are full of work and action to develop productivity through merger, acquisition and joint venture. Therefore, in this research assignment I will define each of merger, acquisition and joint vent, give examples for each and finally distinguish advantages and disadvantages. Before going into any further details it’s necessary to distinguish between merger and acquisition, when two companies mostly of the same size agree to go merge as a single company rather than working separately is known as merger. Whereas acquisition when a company takes over another company and distinguish itself as one company. The main purpose of merger is to create a firm of successful combination to sum the values through synergy, a good illustration of this Daimler-Benz AG, markets of Mercedes Bens. Daimler AG was formed in (2007) which is very recent; this company had a huge success because of the successful merger. The good side of merging a company is employees are able to share and gain more knowledge through the right cooperation with successful process that is requires a strong vision and a critical strategy plane, this will help employees to modify themselves if there are any culture conflicts and share the business in the same field of work. Moreover, merger will increase the capital funds and assets for better structures and buildings. Yet, there are always advantages and disadvantages of any kind of merger. The bad side of merging is that sometimes it causes unbalance in stock price, confusion between employees, conflict in business, fear of failure, anger and uncertainty between employees, thus making it possible to cause distraction between employees and job losses. Moreover, the worst part is that merged companies will never be quite as good as separated ones. Thus, it’s necessary to be aware of merging risks. Before explaining acquisition it’s important to explain a bit more merger. When two companies join together to increase the share price and defined as anticompetitive this is known as monopoly. For instant, when Zain company in Kuwait holds 30% of the market share and Wataniya company Holds 30% of the market share, their combined share holed will increase to 60% and this is very bad merge because it influences the consumer. Therefore, the government has to block them, even though merger causes a huge success between two companies a balance between the produce and consumer in needed. There are many companies that have been taken over other companies and that is a corporative action in which a company buy most of its values, a good illustration of this Google and Yahoo. Both of them are computer software and world leading in computer search engine, they have taken over many search engines and other services such as video, wave and mail between (2003 – 2009) .However, acquisition is very beneficial for companies who are facing challenges and dropping down rapidly, because it will help them grow up instead of losing every value of the company; it’s also beneficial to gain brand recognition to be known by most people and reduces competition if a rival is taken over. Moreover, acquisition helps employees to integrate and communicating effectively with everyone who will be affected by changes through helping employees to cope with transactions. On other hand, companies mostly will not share the values instead of that; values will be beneficial in one way only. Therefore, it’s hard to share values, this could conflict damages between the two companies through miss understanding in the field of business and spread risks if there is no enough elaboration for the failure. Acquisition can be beneficial and unbeneficial depending on the type of business. It’s not necessary for any company to merge or acquire another company to produce a unique product of its kind, companies can join together to produce one or two products, this is known as joint venture, a good illustration of this Gphone known as “Android”, it’s amazing combination of both hardware and software between two companies which are Google and HTC, it was invented in (2010) which is very recent and in development progress, joint ventures beneficial in many cases such as accessing to greater resources and new markets for better productivity. Moreover, joint venture helps employees to gain new capacity of experience and share risks with a venture partner, this will reduce the chance of failure; it’s true that money will be split into two sides. However, the potential for a larger profit is much greater with a joint venture. On the other hand, it

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1. Basic. I would put it in the early high school range, although, sadly some colleges let their students get by with this type of stuff. Definitely NOT professional. Grade? lol maybe a 65% Let me add, that the writer shows he/she did the research. However, the writing style is what's lacking. For example, first sentence - use "economics" or "the economy." Subject-verb tenses are often incorrect as well as usage of plurals...basic mistakes that should not be acceptable at the 16+ age.
2. With all due respect, i could probably write this, given a lot of time. I am 14. Personally, I think the person who wrote this must be over 18 to actually care about merger acquisitions, android, mercedes benz, etc. I would say the writer is 19-24. I would grade this essay 89% because it is well written and thoroughly explains itself in an easy to understand way. I didn't give it 100% because it wasn't too spectacular. By basic and professional, what do you mean? I would say that this is a professionally done essay and could be presented at a board meeting or somewhere else, because it is perfectly bland for the occaison. Overall... it is meh. I think the first guy has a point but although it is boring it has been well researched.
3. Age- probably 15 or so. High school age probably. Grade- mid 80's or so. I'd say 86-7% Writing- Not shabby, but it could use some work. I noticed that you used "good illustration" at least twice. First off, you should not speak to your audience. Also, do not say what you are going to do. "Just Do It". you do not need to and should not say "In this research assignment I will...blahblahblah" Also, your intro sentence is a bit dull. However, you do not want to turn a research paper into a creative writing piece, lol. Try approaching your topic on a tangent and start your intro paragraph generally and progress in detail and specifics so that it leads into your thesis at the end of the intro paragraph. Also, your writing is a bit rigid at times, and it sounds like you are just shouting things out loud, like "I am sad" or "The sky is a shade of blue" (exaggeration) Overall though, your paper is nice. Good luck as you strive for perfection.