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Help Edit college assignment for company Mission?

here is my instuctors request You need to do a little ‘wordsmithing’ on your Mission statement. The use of “Our”, “We”, and the incomplete sentences in the bullet listing without nouns/pronouns is inconsistent and difficult to read. Also, some of the statements are a little long. Mission •Our emphasis is on the beauty of your home and window treatments by offering popular colors and style choices to meet current trends in the design market. • We will provide an experienced window decorator to help instill confidence in customer selection of product with no direct extra cost to customer. •Dedicated to passing quality custom made merchandise with honesty at least cost to customer. •Provide education on different energy efficient options with products to essentially become known as environmentally friendly company. In summary our mission is to provide a full service educated window decorating advisor to assist in all your product selection, questions and needs at the lowest possible price without compromising qualityl.

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1. Mission: -- To enhance the beauty of your home with fashionable and professionally tailored window treatments -- To assure the ultimate in convenience by providing in-home consultations with an experienced window decorate -- To provide education regarding materials, styles and even energy efficiency. -- To a guarantee a quality service from initial consultation to final installation for one low cost.